Pretty nice, I liked it
Would be perfect if it be a little bit longer
But a poem isnt necessary long so, Good job
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| Author: | Jessica [ February 16th, 2008, 2:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | The Streets (Poem) |
I've just been suspended the 4th time this school year and its nothing new. I'm on the edge of being kicked outta home but I hope I don't. I was watching a documentary on street people and I knew right away how harsh life after being kicked out of home is, so I decided to write this. "The door is locked now, but can open if you're true" Metallica - The Unforgiven II The Streets Behind that corner Some may mourn Away from home We've been torn This desolate place This fear-filled space Doom at every turn As you let your feelings burn "Out the door, and don't come back!" I remember that all too well Is this reality? Am I next? |
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| Author: | Adbot [ February 16th, 2008, 2:01 am ] |
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| Author: | Iron Maiden [ February 16th, 2008, 11:29 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Streets (Poem) |
Pretty nice, I liked it Would be perfect if it be a little bit longer But a poem isnt necessary long so, Good job
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| Author: | schoolboy [ February 18th, 2008, 12:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Streets (Poem) |
very good plz dont get kicked outta your house ! |
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