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Gee, that was interesting.

On the line about wishing the sun wouldn't fade away..

I like playing sports on dark, cloudy days.

I am not emo, btw.

I just cry often, thats all.

Excelent, will you write annother poem about RuneScape?

Steven wrote:

Excelent, will you write annother poem about RuneScape?

I haven't considered this but I can. The only thing I ask for is can you give me some ideas or which aspect of runescape you would like me to write about?
A challenge I've been given. =D

Not bad. Looks like you put some effort into it.

For future poems, optionally, see if you can get all the lines to contain the same number of total syllables. It makes a poem sound incredible when spoken aloud.

Zac Glenn wrote:

Steven wrote:

Excelent, will you write annother poem about RuneScape?

I haven't considered this but I can. The only thing I ask for is can you give me some ideas or which aspect of runescape you would like me to write about?
A challenge I've been given. =D

Perhaps oh, Agility or RuneCrafting? That'd be great, in my opinion.

Hmm, wow this will be a task. I'll have to do some research. Ok, I'll work on this.
One more thing, do you want me to do it from the RuneScape character's perspective or me/you (the human playing the game)?

Zac Glenn wrote:

Maybe the Charicters' perspective?

Steven wrote:

Zac Glenn wrote:

Maybe the Charicters' perspective?

Oki doki, well give me a week at the minimum and I'll post it.
If you think of anything that you think might help me out then please post.
If I run into some writers block I might ask for some help.

Zac Glenn wrote:

Steven wrote:

Maybe the Charicters' perspective?

Oki doki, well give me a week at the minimum and I'll post it.
If you think of anything that you think might help me out then please post.
If I run into some writers block I might ask for some help.

oki doki, do you want me to also personalize to you or no?

Author:	Unbirthday [ January 18th, 2008, 12:51 am ]
Post subject:	Soccer Poem
Soccer Poem Soccer is what we play it’s what we do I’d make soccer my job if I was able to It starts with one just messing around The will in his head the ball on the ground Again and again he plays all day Wishing for one day that the sun won’t fade away He gathers some friends and together they play But all their wishes together can’t make the sun stay Brothers they become and a team they form To stick together during the summer sun and the treacherous storm They battle each team the fans rise them up Hoping to make it to the final battle and take the cup The final battle is here the end is near not giving it their all is their only fear They played like the practiced that’s all they had to do to To beat the opposing team ten to two Winners they were champions they became Fortune was in their future and the same with fame Soccer is what I played it’s what I did I make soccer my job as I dreamed as a kid It started with one just messing around The will in his head and the ball on the ground Zac Glenn © 2008

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Author:	Dokter Bob [ January 18th, 2008, 9:37 am ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Gee, that was interesting. On the line about wishing the sun wouldn't fade away.. I like playing sports on dark, cloudy days. I am not emo, btw. I just cry often, thats all.

Author:	Unbirthday [ January 18th, 2008, 3:52 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Dokter Bob wrote: Gee, that was interesting. On the line about wishing the sun wouldn't fade away.. I like playing sports on dark, cloudy days. I am not emo, btw. I just cry often, thats all. Lol, thanks for the input. *Note to self. . . Dokter Bob is not emo ^_^

Author:	Steven [ January 19th, 2008, 7:24 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Excelent, will you write annother poem about RuneScape?

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Author:	Unbirthday [ January 20th, 2008, 1:47 am ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Steven wrote: Excelent, will you write annother poem about RuneScape? I haven't considered this but I can. The only thing I ask for is can you give me some ideas or which aspect of runescape you would like me to write about? A challenge I've been given. =D

Author:	Alex 43 [ January 20th, 2008, 10:21 am ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Not bad. Looks like you put some effort into it. For future poems, optionally, see if you can get all the lines to contain the same number of total syllables. It makes a poem sound incredible when spoken aloud.

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Author:	Steven [ January 20th, 2008, 12:53 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Zac Glenn wrote: Steven wrote: Excelent, will you write annother poem about RuneScape? I haven't considered this but I can. The only thing I ask for is can you give me some ideas or which aspect of runescape you would like me to write about? A challenge I've been given. =D Perhaps oh, Agility or RuneCrafting? That'd be great, in my opinion.

Author:	Unbirthday [ January 20th, 2008, 1:09 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Alex 43 wrote: Not bad. Looks like you put some effort into it. For future poems, optionally, see if you can get all the lines to contain the same number of total syllables. It makes a poem sound incredible when spoken aloud. Presentation: I believe 50% is the poem, and 50% is how the poem is read. For me to read this to you, it would bring out how incredible it really is. Plus many people think poems have to end with rhyming words and have the same number or syllables in corresponding sentences to be great. When in reality, it is harder to write a poem without ending with rhyming words and to have different syllable counts and still be good. I have wrote many poems to the guidelines that you have expressed and recently I have been trying to better my ability with writing poems according to the guidelines I just explained and still have the poems turnout good. I read this to my class and my english teacher expressed how good it was. Therefore I appreciate your input, but I also take into consideration input of others. Thanks again Steven wrote: Zac Glenn wrote: Steven wrote: Excelent, will you write annother poem about RuneScape? I haven't considered this but I can. The only thing I ask for is can you give me some ideas or which aspect of runescape you would like me to write about? A challenge I've been given. =D Perhaps oh, Agility or RuneCrafting? That'd be great, in my opinion. Hmm, wow this will be a task. I'll have to do some research. Ok, I'll work on this. One more thing, do you want me to do it from the RuneScape character's perspective or me/you (the human playing the game)?

Author:	Steven [ January 20th, 2008, 2:01 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Zac Glenn wrote: Hmm, wow this will be a task. I'll have to do some research. Ok, I'll work on this. One more thing, do you want me to do it from the RuneScape character's perspective or me/you (the human playing the game)? Maybe the Charicters' perspective?

Author:	Unbirthday [ January 20th, 2008, 2:14 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Steven wrote: Zac Glenn wrote: Hmm, wow this will be a task. I'll have to do some research. Ok, I'll work on this. One more thing, do you want me to do it from the RuneScape character's perspective or me/you (the human playing the game)? Maybe the Charicters' perspective? Oki doki, well give me a week at the minimum and I'll post it. If you think of anything that you think might help me out then please post. If I run into some writers block I might ask for some help.

Author:	Steven [ January 20th, 2008, 3:59 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Zac Glenn wrote: Steven wrote: Zac Glenn wrote: Hmm, wow this will be a task. I'll have to do some research. Ok, I'll work on this. One more thing, do you want me to do it from the RuneScape character's perspective or me/you (the human playing the game)? Maybe the Charicters' perspective? Oki doki, well give me a week at the minimum and I'll post it. If you think of anything that you think might help me out then please post. If I run into some writers block I might ask for some help. Sure thing. I was thinking about some area in the poem when the player says "When I climb up this rope..." That just sounds like agility to me.

Author:	Unbirthday [ January 20th, 2008, 4:16 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Steven wrote: Zac Glenn wrote: Steven wrote: Hmm, wow this will be a task. I'll have to do some research. Ok, I'll work on this. One more thing, do you want me to do it from the RuneScape character's perspective or me/you (the human playing the game)? Maybe the Charicters' perspective? Oki doki, well give me a week at the minimum and I'll post it. If you think of anything that you think might help me out then please post. If I run into some writers block I might ask for some help. Sure thing. I was thinking about some area in the poem when the player says "When I climb up this rope..." That just sounds like agility to me. [/quote] oki doki, do you want me to also personalize to you or no?

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Author:	Steven [ January 20th, 2008, 4:31 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Soccer Poem
Zac Glenn wrote: oki doki, do you want me to also personalize to you or no? No thanks, I'm helping you out, this isn't for me. EDIT: OMFG DRAGON MEMBER.