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Author:  Matt [ September 10th, 2007, 6:23 am ]
Post subject:  It quacks like a duck

Haha, soyea I haven't posted much poetry on here lately. :O I'm gonna start putting some recent stuff up so expect some stuff and shtuff. This one's called "It quacks like a duck."




The baby
ducks

climbed out of the shells
and danced

in the water.


Their cotton fluff bodies

retained water
and they sank.


in the puddle




Comment/Critique/Crayfish

- Matt

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Author:  Jamie [ September 10th, 2007, 12:34 pm ]
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....The baby ducks DIED?! o_o

Other than that it's cool, and I like the way it's set up. Oh yea here's your crayfish:

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