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PostPosted: May 25th, 2007, 12:22 am 
Well its not really a Porm or a Story, Its A Song i guess i started writing it in my brain and singing it to myself when i felt hurt from a guy, My friends heard me singing it to myself one day and told me to write it down to help me out cause i was really down.

Well here it is....

He says that he loves me He says that he cares for me
Oh Oh Oh Ohhhhh
But in the end he goes back to her
Saying that she needs you
She says she never stopped caring for you
She thought you stop caring for
When you was thinking the same

He says that he loves me He says that he cares for me
He watches me get hurt but he doesn’t really see it
He says everything will be fine
But he doesn’t no how much he ment to me
He watches me fall 2 the floor crushed
But still walks to her trying to get her back
In the end he'll still have her and ill still be hurt

Oh No No Noooo

I cant take this any moreeeee
I guess its what u needed
You just liked her more
You say its all a big mistake
You wished this never happen
But wishes never come true

You hurt me You broke my heart
And watched me fall apart
Well sweetie, my feelings for you will fade
You use to make it seem like nothing could go wrong
And every thing was alright
But now I have to be strong
And my feelings I'll have to fight
So baby, after you messed me up
And crushed me down
I'll have to stand back up
And keep away that frown.
Don't take it personally
I'm over you sweetie

Now that every time I see him
my love for him turns into hate
I cant hide it but every time he speaks to me
it just becomes a fight

Oh no no noooo

I cant take this any moreeeee
I guess its what u needed
You just liked her more
You say its all a big mistake
You wished this never happen
But wishes never come true

I should have known from the start
he would hurt me so much
I should have never kissed him back
when he kissed me in the start
I cant stop thinking of him
I’ve tried getting him out off my mind
now the walls are crumbling around me
its getting hard to breath in here without him
he doesn’t have a clue what he has done to me
I was just another girl sitting on the side line
And Now I feel stupid for falling for you
And I don’t know what to do

Oh no no noooo

You hurt me You broke my heart
And watched me fall apart
Well sweetie, my feelings for you will fade
You use to make it seem like nothing could go wrong
And every thing was alright
But now I have to be strong
And my feelings I'll have to fight
So baby, after you messed me up
And crushed me down
I'll have to stand back up
And keep away that frown.
Don't take it personally
I'm over you sweetie

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Tell me what you think off it (Thats if you want to) :)


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PostPosted: May 25th, 2007, 12:35 am 
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Hope you find/found someone better than that guy in there. It's really good. I've always had trouble writing songs because I can't imagine all of the different instruments playing at the same times while I'm writing lyrics, it's confuses me and gives me a headache. >.<


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PostPosted: May 26th, 2007, 9:56 pm 
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Very nice. I really hope you make more, and that you find somebody for you that's better than that person in the song. Nine out of ten, from me.

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Very good, I hope you've found a better person than the one in this song.

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