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| Author: | Killjoy [ November 6th, 2010, 10:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | My first techno song. |
Just thought I would post it here seeing how I am kind of heading in the music direction. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5025719/First%20Techno%20Song.mp3 Tell me what you think! Its not done yet (as you can see) I am looking for some constructive criticisim. Thanks. |
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| Author: | Adbot [ November 6th, 2010, 10:26 pm ] |
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| Author: | Duke Juker [ November 6th, 2010, 11:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first techno song. |
The music seemed to go off in a lot of directions, mostly ones I wasn't expecting. It's not a bad thing I suppose, but it was kinda weird. Otherwise, it seems to be good. The soft-loud intro was nice. I'd be interested to see where you go with it. |
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| Author: | The Unknown Man [ November 10th, 2010, 2:03 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first techno song. |
I can see where you going with this it's has potential. But yea don't have it going it in different directions |
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| Author: | Pennstate315 [ November 15th, 2010, 7:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first techno song. |
hmmm I liked it, great beginning. That was my favorite part. Criticism, probably what the others said try to keep the song in more of one direction. |
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| Author: | Warren [ November 16th, 2010, 10:28 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first techno song. |
I don't understand what they mean when they say it goes in different directions. XD Except with the abrupt ending but I don't expect it to be like that when it's finished so lol The lead thingy is too loud imo tho |
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| Author: | Jamie [ November 22nd, 2010, 10:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first techno song. |
You have four different ...parts for lack of better terms. Each one is based around a chord. The first three work (although in my opinion, you could work on the chord progression even more because it seems like you're just switching randomly). The fourth one however, goes totally off (melody doesn't match the bass) and doesn't lead into the first chord again, which is what people mean when it goes in different directions. Musically, it doesn't connect. The beat is nice though. |
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| Author: | Adbot [ November 22nd, 2010, 10:30 pm ] |
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| Author: | Ryan [ December 2nd, 2010, 3:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first techno song. |
Yeah you kinda need to watch what key you are playing in, because as bloon said the fourth part doesn't fit in with the other three. I think if you were to fix that then it has really good potential  I think if you want the song to be more outstanding and vibrant then it would be good for a drum beat to kick in quite soon after that, as well as adding perhaps a background chord progression, just to give the song some more texture  Good so far though!
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